The only thing I noticed was that you did not mention installing the drivers. You mentioned when plugging the phone in that you must have already installed the phone, but not that separate drivers must be installed.
I liked that you mentioned to not be alarmed a lot too, a lot of people get nervous when things dont happen instantly lol.
And you might consider adding links into the description for people to find things easily.
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